I asked these questions
- Would it appeal to my target audience of new designers interested in signage?
- Is my layout appropriate?
- Is the binding method appropriate to my ideas?
- does my handwriting is the book look okay?
We had some good discussions and this is my feedback
- Spilt up the text into smaller columns so the text isn't so daunting
- It can look a bit childish but playful maybe think more about colour
- leave room for spiral binding and maybe make it like a calendar
- Play around with layout, maybe the colours for food aren't needed
- Maybe add the map to each page showing where the takeaway is.
- Could add food reviews from online
- Go upstairs and ask how to layout my idea on indesign
This feedback was very helpful as I didn't realise that my text looked big and I also could do more layout options. Due to this feedback I will go back to designing and make some changes.
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