Latest Design Decisions

After the critique a common comment was that the text was to big. This lead to me having the design decision to split up the text. This is a better layout as individuals are more likely to read the writing if it looks smaller and easier to read rather than having a larger block of text that can looking daunting or boring. As part of my target audience of new designers I would stay away from a book filled with large paragraphs of texts so this being pointed out in my book has helped me to change this design decision for the better.
Beginning to incorporate my handwriting to the publication I went from my Review Box type design to something that adds more colour due to listening to some feedback of people saying it doesn't quite fit with the layout. I also had the idea of the smaller review being something that you can tear out and take with you therefore you can use it if you want to go to the place your self to look or go for food.

Starting to create elements of my pages I have handwritten all of the small reviews using my key so there is less writing and using my handwriting makes it look more personal. They are in the colours of my key which I wrote down to keep constant and organised.