I wanted to get some feedback I could discuss with Penny and Louis. Although I wanted to ask for some feedback from the target audience which is children. I think children will benefit more from seeing physical work and drawings rather than ideas.
What do you think of the theme of fairytales
Good because they are dying out however they could be a bit old fashioned.
You could also say that it could lead to bear reading other stories like horrid henry or harry potter etc.
Do you think Stickers will make children want to collect more?
Yes, children love to collect things
The idea of the concertina book is interesting and children won’t have seen many in that style.
However how will you make the background scenes merge together.
What do you think of the illustration ideas
Love the idea of the comedy of bear as a character and that you can make children laugh through the images
Maybe Pennys handwritten style could work well for type?
Louis work looks good for background images and texture
Pennys character design looks good for bear.
Other comments
A strong concept
Make adults like it as they are buying it for their children
The fact idea is really fun
Maybe for Jack and the beanstalk have a fact of the worlds tallest man.I will talk through this feedback and my next group meeting.
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