Yesterday I presented my final symbol design to a group of other students and one of my tutors. I made a powerpoint Presentation and talked through my initial ideas, experiments and final outcomes. I got some written and verbal feedback which i will take on board in other projects.
This is my presentation
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| Some pictures of sculptures I took on the trip. |
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| My initial experiments and what I found worked and didn't work. |
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| Joan Miro's ideas and why I liked what he stood for and how it links to YSP. |
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Final Symbol and what makes it unique and stand out.
Peers Feedback
- Range of logos- good to see if ideas would work.
- Good research on artist and incorporating it into work.
- Good research into artist and how his beliefs intertwined with the park.
- Clear about initial ideas and styles
- Detailed research worked well into the work
- Possibly add more development and different possible outcomes and justifications
- Strong design, possibly look into colour
- Specific sculpture inspiration
- Good, clear, simplistic logo
- Good reasons why you choose the sculpture
- Symbol is good, could it be used with colour
- Good variety of symbols and recognition
- Good research
- Type didn't suit your symbol
- Good that you kept with the theme
- I like the tribal feel to it
- Would be nice to see colour within the logo to represent busy family atmosphere that the park has
- I like the abstract final design, How did you get there?
- I like the negative space and how it works on a small and large scale
- Good use of words such as abstract and simple
- Good use of negative space
- Good initial ideas
- Good research
- Very simple but effective
- I like the negative space
- Natural line representational of the park
Tutor Feedback
- Good identification of sculpture forms over nature.
- Good Combination of nature and sculpture.
- Would be good to explore a range of approaches.
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